Come On, Speak Your Mind

By

Isn't it true there are a lot of things we think to ourselves but don't verbalize to the world around us?

Sometimes we confide our true feelings in those close to us but not all the time.  There are things we think that race through our minds as a quick response to a given situation, then there are things that brew over time.

What about you?  Ever think something you'd never dare to verbalize?  I know I have.

And let's admit it, if everyone went around speaking their true feelings and opinions on things the world could be a pretty nasty place, yet at the same time maybe it would make for a peaceful state of existence?  I guess it would all depend.

But what about the characters we write, or the characters we read about?  Do we want them to say everything they think or feel, or does part of the internal conflict not in fact come from their inability to verbalize these things?

Maybe we have a character that is too proud to say sorry, even though they would do anything to mend a relationship.  Pride won't let them communicate their apology.

Maybe we have a character who loves someone but would rather walk through the desert than admit their true feelings, as if it's a weakness.

Maybe we have a complex character who cares too much about things going on around him/her but the other characters in the book would never pick up on that.

Maybe we have a character that doesn't really care for someone else but is too polite to verbalize their true feelings.

Anyway, in my opinion, I believe this human complexity has a definite place in the novels we write, and the novels we read.  And rarely do true feelings demonstrate themselves in a statement, it's something people show, it's energy, it's mannerisms.  Harnessing this aspect in novels makes the characters relatable.  What do you think?

Comments

  1. Dr. Niamh CluneSeptember 20, 2011 at 8:57 AM

    Again, another really interesting and relevant blog! thank You Carolyn

    ReplyDelete
  2. Sylvia NeySeptember 20, 2011 at 11:26 AM

    Good post - very true! I'm swinging by from Author Central and I look forward to visiting again.

    Sylvia
    www.writinginwonderland.blogspot.com

    ReplyDelete
  3. BriSeptember 20, 2011 at 1:40 PM

    I flew in from AC.
    I can identify with the sentiments expressed. I may think them but I don't verbalize anything that would hurt someone else. Instead, it stays inside. I think it can be true of the characters in a book most times, since I don't think the author would like the reader to superimpose the thoughts and feelings of the character as the thoughts and feelings of the author. As an author, I know I would lean that way but . . maybe not.

    ReplyDelete
  4. Laura JosephsenSeptember 20, 2011 at 2:50 PM

    I agree--people and emotions and what we say and how we say them (or what we don't say and how we don't say them) are complex. Characters who are "real" are going to have these complexities, too.

    ReplyDelete
  5. ColletteSeptember 20, 2011 at 4:24 PM

    Another thought-provoking post. You are, as always, very correct. Our thoughts are in constant fluctuation, and often our characters reflect that as well. I know I've written 'he/she bit back a reply' a time or two :). It's human nature, right?

    ReplyDelete
  6. Carolyn ArnoldSeptember 20, 2011 at 7:18 PM

    All of you are great! Thank you all for your comments :)

    ReplyDelete
  7. Writer Pat NewcombeSeptember 21, 2011 at 7:24 AM

    I alwasy think of exactly the right thing to say when it's too late! I wish I could easily spout forth the smart 'on target' remark in answer to someone at the time. Then again, perhaps not... Least said and all that?

    ReplyDelete
  8. Carolyn ArnoldSeptember 21, 2011 at 7:37 AM

    Pat, your comment makes me think of the movie YOU'VE GOT MAIL where Meg Ryan tells Tom Hanks she wishes she had the ability to snap back with a sharp remark. She eventually does and is sorry she did.

    ReplyDelete
  9. Caroline GerardoFebruary 14, 2012 at 9:28 PM

    If a character were to spout everything that flows around in their little head the words and fights would be dizzying. Great post

    ReplyDelete
  10. Carolyn ArnoldFebruary 15, 2012 at 7:55 AM

    Wouldn't that be an interesting trip! LOL

    Glad you enjoyed the post.

    ReplyDelete

Post a Comment

Thank you for taking the time to make a comment.

Popular posts from this blog

When Family Doesn't Support Your Writing

By
If you can empathize with the title of this post, then you're not alone.  So many writers, myself included, can honestly say they have family members who don't support their writing.  Some may go so far as to tell you they don't even want to hear about what you're working on, what you've done, what your goals are.  That hurts. But think about it this way, in some ways is writing any different that an other life decisions your family may not agree with?  I'm sure, if you're like me, you get very defensive when it comes to your writing.  In fact, I'm not going to deny that it places an iron wedge in the relationships.  After all, if your focus in life is your writing, and they ask so what have you been up to ...what are you supposed to do lie, remain quiet, answer another way even though you're so excited about your current WIP you'd tell a stranger?  Ticking clocks are heard in the background while you decide.
Read more

A Big Decision...

By
Image
For those of you who know me, and follow me on Twitter, you may be aware that I’ve been debating whether to pursue publishing traditionally, or take the plunge and self-publish.  With all the “buzz” on the internet, and after great consideration, I have decided to go ahead and self-publish. I had asked myself, does this mean I’m giving up ?  And, the answer is irrevocably no.  Self-publishing used to carry a type of stigma that somehow labelled the work as adhering to a lower standard, but things have changed.  Authors are taking pride in their work like never before, and just because of the increasing ease to self-publishing, they’re not allowing this to affect the quality. In making my decision, I also considered the fact that just because a book is published traditionally it doesn’t mean that it will meet with success.  Many self-published books have received awards, honourable mentions, and have met with even more-than-modest sales.  In fact, there’s ...
Read more

Write What You Love

By
We've all heard the advice, write what you know.  There's been a lot of debate over this piece of advice.  Some see it as valid direction while others argue that there wouldn't be any books if we just wrote what we know.  For example, how many mystery novels are written by real-life detectives?  And, I guess that advice is null when it comes to fantasy genres, and historical fictional works.  No fairy from Neverland wrote a book, and no one from over a hundred years ago can write a book currently.   But, this doesn't mean that we can get sloppy, in fact more work is involved, and this is why writing what we love supersedes all, in my opinion.  How else would we get motivated, and stay motivated to see a novel through to the end? In fact isn't it love for what we’re writing what pushes us through to the conclusion even when we may find the interest in our book weaning, or through the rough middles?  Isn't it the love for what we're writing that f...
Read more